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I have fallen,
I fell in love with you.
Nothing will stop me,
From winning your heart.
You will see me,
You will love me,
You will know me,
As I know wish you.

Nothing hurts me more,
Than seeing you in pain.
Crying over fear of life,
For threats have been sent your way.
I'll find them and kill them,
And the threats will go away.
I'll take my life before I lose you,
I'll end the pain of your loss.

For the many years I lived,
Have I once felt this strong.
I want to hold you,
Make you feel safe.
You gave me emotion,
And restored my coloured sight,
You have kept the demon at bay,
For now.

I've been alone for many years,
No emotion and no fears.
Then I met you,
And things have all changed.

I gave you blood,
You gave me yours,
And with this exchange,
Your life will change,
I will know what you think,
And the same will go for you.

Nothing secret will tear us apart,
I will be by your side,
I don't care what's in the past,
I only care if you are alright.
This is part one. i couldnt think of anything else to add coz it almost morning and caffine is running low.

Based on carpathians created by Christine Feehan
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asweetbabydoll Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Good Job, I love this series a lot. Skyler and Dimitri are my favorite couple =)
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011
I've been reading more Dark hunter than carpathian lately,
i didnt even know that book was released
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KittyOverlordGiggy Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
<3 I love the Dark series aswell. Good Job!
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
thanks
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Desertfire Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2008   General Artist
Beautiful poem!! I love the Dark Series!
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
thanks
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Desertfire Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008   General Artist
welcome
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Ebony-Chrystal Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
That is really good.

Fave
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
thankoo
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Ebony-Chrystal Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
welcome ^^
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bloodied-hollow-soul Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
nice
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
thnx
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skyland13 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
Low on caffeine eh? :XD: I luv vampire stuff. :D Except I'm limited to one vampire show a week since mum thinks I'm watching to much gorry stuff. :( All it is is fake blood and dummies.
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
wow that sucks. i can watch vampire movies whenever i wana
and my mum lends me her vampire books
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skyland13 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
Aw..I'm jealous. :XD: I luv mythical creatures and mostly vampires. :D They are so interesting. Ur mum sounds really cool. :D
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
my mum is awsome i just wouldnt annoy her.
shes scary
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skyland13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
:XD: So when u annoy her she is scary? x3 My mum is scary to when u annoy her. ;p
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
i doubt it.
I almost lose my mind when she annoy her.
she say things things that disturb me
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skyland13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
:XD: Poor u.
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frogondavison Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
she told me my dad used to be a stripper
an it not cool
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